I'll lock this thread at the end of this weekend but I wanted to see what some of you thought the next challenge should be. Here are some of my thoughts.

- story structure - Heroes Journey as example
- write synopsis, treatment, or bullet point list.
- draw 4 pages of thumbnails
- make some layouts. (figure out book dimensions)
- Art direction. Find reference and imitate a frame.
- Expression sheet, Modelsheets.
- Anatomy exercise

If anyone has something else they think should be next then let me know.

Great stuff everyone!!!

@wizardofkitty - This is a great start of a turnaround. The head proportions look good in comparison to each other but the arms, jacket, and legs all change length in each view. I'd suggest keeping those feet flat on the ground so you can really tell how tall she is. I also see potential problems with how the front of the clothes stick out of the jacket on the profile shot but in the front shot it seems like they are not sticking out at all. Now for the most important part, making the 3/4 front and 3/4 back views. These are really important views unless you only plan on seeing your character front on or profile like this. Plus the 3/4 views are where you really see where your problems are happening. Let me know if you want me to do a paintover to help point out what I'm talking about.

new Thrall: Cool concept tongman, I really like your style. Glad to see a new contribution. I think I need to take another crack at this challenge. I've been letting the pencil stagnate way too long. Thanks for the inspiration.