I'm still very very new to making comics even though I grew up with them. A while ago I took part in the "Panels of the week" challenge over on ConceptArt.Org, choosing the theme of a steampunk love story. I originally scripted the story to be 6 pages long but never got around to that... It was all created under considerable time pressure, so it's far from perfect - no time to gather and use references, for example. And of course the pages are sized down considerably, the originals are 166% of what you see here.
I got a few helpful critiques already and I myself can tell about three dozen things that are wrong with it, but more opinions can never hurt. Just whack me over the head with it! (Although maybe there's something I didn't fail at completely...? Haha!)
Thanks in advance for having a look, folks! I hope I'll have more to post next week, I'm working on a 4-pager right now. Working my way up slowly while working out the premises for a proper webcomic...